Where Children Would Go (If They Never Learnt), PG-13

Jul 29, 2012 10:34

Title: Where Children Would Go (If They Never Learnt)
Rating: R
Word Count: 7451
Summary: I wanna dance the tango with chance, 'cause nothing gets done with dust in your gun.
Notes: This blends cinematic with comics and extrapolates from there.

Where Children Would Go )

fic, natasha romanov/james barnes, avengers (2012)

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nival_vixen July 31 2012, 12:49:48 UTC
That was so brilliant! Extremely bittersweet at the end there, but I loved all of it, and it was so interesting to see your version of their future. It was pure brilliance. Great work! ^_^

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lucdarling August 10 2012, 18:40:07 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment, I'm delighted to know you enjoyed this.
The ending isn't a happy one, but it's hopefully realistic within/for the setting? I really liked it, in any case. It was a nice departure from the 'everyone lived happily ever after' at least.

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nival_vixen August 11 2012, 02:28:42 UTC
You're very welcome! ^_^ I really did enjoy it, it was brilliant to read!
No, definitely not a happy one, but it is realistic for the setting, and I wish their battle could be written too, but it's a perfect ending as well. If that makes sense? :)
That's very true; all of the happily ever after's are getting a bit stale now.

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cradle_song August 3 2012, 22:29:53 UTC
asdpojiiadf augh christ I cannot express my feels for this fic, my FEELS.

Just the idea of the three of them at the end of everything, the only ones left, just just just -- BAWWW BABIES. ;___;

/wibble

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lucdarling August 10 2012, 18:41:19 UTC
I know, I know. There there, perhaps some day I'll be kinder with their future.
I'll take your keyboard smash as a sign of a job well done. Thanks so much.

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