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burnt_hamster October 24 2011, 21:37:21 UTC
Spectacular! I hope you write more in this verse it's absolutely fascinating! Ugh, I'd love to read more!

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mysterypoet66 October 24 2011, 22:28:57 UTC
There's still a mystery to be solved, so I'm hoping we'll see more of this. Well done, really well done. :)

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verusmayaii October 24 2011, 22:40:02 UTC
oh gosh, I love this so much. very emotionally-charged, but I have to say hands down my favorite part of the story is how you ordered the little scenes. it was a nice bit of simultaneous plot-progression and story-backtracking (does that make sense?). either way, great job, and as all the rest are saying, I'd love to see more! (please :3)

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sabrinaphynn October 25 2011, 00:28:56 UTC
I really like this and hope that we see more in this AU as you have poured such life into it. Whenever you want, I would be happy o re- visit. The background ideas are very luxurious.

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nagasasu October 25 2011, 02:44:54 UTC
*flails*
OMFG, I know it says "2/2" but afdjaskl;jfklsa;jfklasjs, I would so read more of this. Too overwhelmed to say much, but this was great.

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