Fic Update: Chariots of the Gods (YGO)

Sep 07, 2008 11:34

My lovely beta reader kmktr found this chapter in her email archive, so I was able to post an update to "Chariots of the Gods"!

CotG: Chapter 26Note: I was in the midst of doing massive revisions of the story when the old computer cacked it. I decided to change "pilot" to "Duelist" when referring to the Duel Mecha pilots, and the new chapter reflects ( Read more... )

character: piotr korone (oc), ygo fic: chariots of the gods, character: duke devlin

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blazingskies September 8 2008, 15:38:53 UTC
oooh, tantalising us again, I see! The plot just keeps getting more intriguing, and I still love how you've managed to put together all the science behind the duel mechas and gestalts, it feels very real.

:)

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lucidscreamer September 10 2008, 16:27:19 UTC
Oh, thanks! Honestly, next to fight scenes, I consider technobabble my weakest point. I did some quick research into AIs just to get a feel for the terminology, but I'm mostly making this up as I go. I'm glad to hear what I'm coming up with sounds workable w/in the context of the story!

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lucidscreamer September 9 2008, 19:56:43 UTC
You probably did send it back to me, but I was using a different email account back then (and they wiped my saved files because I failed to log-in during all those months with no computer or net access, grr), so I don't have it now. :(

I'm trying to wrangle my li'l bro into helping me with the computer (since I am a complete klutz with tools and technology!), but he's rebuilding a classic truck and that's all he wants to do lately. lol Not that I blame him. There are many, many things I'd rather do than futz around with broken computers! x_x

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lucidscreamer September 10 2008, 16:13:28 UTC
I usually offer Li'l Bro baked goods. He's a sucker for my green tea cupcakes. But he's been resisting, due to the lure of automotive restoration.

LOL It's spelled right (I looked it up :D), but I could so see him getting teased for it. Actually, I can see Otto doing it just to shut him up (because I know Korone likes to tease *Otto*)....

Korone: ::is a nuisance::

Otto: I'm trying to work, Piotr. Why don't you go... look for your missing 'e' or something?

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nikkiwhitecraft September 9 2008, 17:41:14 UTC
oh wow I have just fallen in love with your stories and so cannot wait until the next update, I soo want to know what's happened to Jou and Seto and what will happen once the puzzle is complete.

I hope you get your harddrive working soon so you can access the rest, though have you thought about taking it out and trying it in another system?

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lucidscreamer September 9 2008, 19:00:11 UTC
oh wow I have just fallen in love with your stories and so cannot wait until the next update, I soo want to know what's happened to Jou and Seto and what will happen once the puzzle is complete.

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying reading my fic. :)

have you thought about taking it out and trying it in another system?

Yes. Unfortunately, the only working computer I have access to is my laptop, running XP. The old drive is formatted for Win98 (FAT32) and is incompatible with XP.

I hope to frankenstein a working system just long enough to copy all my data. Hopefully soon! In the meantime, since locating this chapter, I may be able to work on the next one, just from memory. Wish me luck! ;)

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