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The Rain - Chapter 16 (final chapter)

Jan 14, 2011 21:45

Title: The Rain
Pairing: Kris/Adam
Rating: NC-17 occasionally
Warnings: some violence and horror elements
Summary: AI8 tour. Adam is involved in a serious car accident that leaves him struggling to recover emotionally. Kris tries to help but is soon dealing with his own internal crisis.

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Comments 23

glambamm86 January 19 2011, 21:19:59 UTC

I loved it. So beautifully written. I am going to have to reread this, cause it was hard to read thru the tears! I agree that we do need a sequel though. Can't wait to see how the boys are doing!! Great job!! <3

lucidseeming January 20 2011, 05:34:36 UTC

Thank you for reading. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Another vote for a sequel, huh? Hmmm...

crybaby4u January 19 2011, 23:16:06 UTC

Very good story you have here. Very well written. It hit a very emotional core. There seems to be more here. I know not all stories need to be tied up but I think they a little more to say here and if your muse agrees I would love to read a little more.

lucidseeming January 20 2011, 05:36:16 UTC

Thanks so much. It's really rewarding to hear that you liked it. Yeah, I felt it wasn't quite there, either. Maybe the next part could be a comedy... :) Well, probably not quite.

robin1961 January 20 2011, 00:48:30 UTC

Loved this the writing was great pulled you into there world ...so think this needs a sequel (hint hint) When adam finally confronted his demons it was like I finally released the breath I had been holding. great job !!!!

lucidseeming January 20 2011, 05:38:56 UTC

Thanks so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you found it involving. I'll try and come up with a follow-up of some kind.

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lucidseeming January 21 2011, 06:20:29 UTC

Thank you! The positive feedback is so gratifying. I'm glad it felt real. I was trying to come up with something vaguely plausible. :)

adamgrrrl January 21 2011, 15:51:12 UTC

you know, it is a DAAAAAAAMN shame that raj wasn't the one hit by a truck. hit 4 realz, ya know ( ... )

lucidseeming January 22 2011, 06:22:18 UTC

Well, so, it wasn't actually an oversight that there were no family members at the hospital...or anywhere. I've never written about people who actually exist before, and I'm mildly freaked out about it. So my rationalization and the arrangement I made with myself was, first, to decide that people who we experience through the media are essentially fictionalizations anyway -- they're exaggerated and simplified versions of real people, which is basically what fictional characters are -- so in writing about media personalities, I'm not writing about real humans. Specious, huh? :) Second, I'm choosing to include only people who have willingly embraced a public persona, i.e., people who went on American Idol. At least those are my guidelines for this story. So this action takes place in an AU where the people are sadly relationless. :) Or maybe their family members are shuttle astronauts on assignment. Or spelunkers on a long exploration out of radio communication. If I wanted to include family members, I guess I could make up ( ... )