Shooting Saturday

[lucidwanderer]

Today's productivity was mostly allotted to War Story scenes, including the climax. I have a series of intercuts between the senator speaking, the protest and the fight between Tony and Jason. It's rather dramatic, though I perhaps might have been too laconic at times. I'm still not the best writer of dialogue in the world, though I am improving by

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[wolftailthefox]

kind of excited to see what you've got written up!