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Twilight Fanfiction: It Just Is, Part One

Aug 21, 2008 18:01

BREAKING DAWN SPOILERS

Title: Instinct
Author: lucie_fanfix
Fandom: Twilight series
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Jacob/Renesme, Alice, mentions of Emmet and Edward
Summary: Renesme tries to define her relationship with Jacob, when what she craves in the undefinable.
Author's Notes: Just a little plot bunny that hopped into my head and ( Read more... )

fanfiction: it just is, fanfiction: twilight

Comments 21

anonymous January 27 2009, 23:51:55 UTC

OMG you should totally send this to stephenie meyer
she would prolly love it plz send it to her:) y would alice want renesme to findd it?
loved it:)

lucie_fanfix February 1 2009, 19:21:40 UTC

Thank you. As for the bit about Alice...You'll find out later, I promise. :)

Impressive anonymous February 1 2009, 18:05:55 UTC

Not that I can say I am much of an expert, but I am a bookworm to say the least. I read all of Breaking Dawn in about a day and a half. I couldn't put it down. And with the snippet that you wrote down, I can safely say that if you had a book written, it would be the same. I was completely enthralled by this side of imprinting that I never even thought of. I was devastated for Renesme and the kind of hole that would put in her life, and awed at Jacob since his past is something he can't control and with his experience, he'd probably chose devotion over love. Who can blame him after his crash and burn with Belle?

Re: Impressive lucie_fanfix February 1 2009, 19:19:23 UTC

Wow, I am just speechless. This is one of the nicest comments someone has ever left me on my writing. Thank you so much. You've definitely given me the incentive to continue writing this story. Part three has long been in the works at should be up soon. :)

On a relatively unrelated note, we seem like we have a lot in common. Would it be okay if I added you?

Re: Impressive lucie_fanfix February 1 2009, 19:22:02 UTC

Just realized your anonymous. Uh, ignore that last bit. Whoops!

Awesome! anonymous February 7 2009, 18:09:52 UTC

That was really cool! I've never thought about imprinting like that before. I can imagine something like that happening to Renesme. Send it to Stephanie Meyer!

funky! anonymous February 23 2009, 19:26:36 UTC

lush story, poor renesme! imprinting is meany!

anonymous April 24 2009, 14:37:28 UTC

WOW! thats really really good! you should take that to stepine or however you spell her name! But its really really good! poor renesme :(! goodjob though! are u making more?