Comments | luciferbelowme: one of those random things

luciferbelowme

one of those random things

Jan 26, 2006 11:05

There is an odor about the world ( Read more... )

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silverladys9sf January 26 2006, 10:11:06 UTC

I like it. Especially the bog of eternal stench. :) Only criticism, I think (but am not sure) that it's "miasma" not "maisma." I dunno. Look at all the live journalness. It's nice. You write poetry, we all write poetry. Happy.

luciferbelowme January 28 2006, 14:02:01 UTC

probably you're right, I went back a forth a few times on that one... but it is nice to think I might have inspired even a little bit more lj activity!

No thanks to Lissa not posting! That's right, you heard me! *backs away timidly* tactheantidog January 26 2006, 10:19:14 UTC

"Smell of Lysol and rotten eggs"
Now that's a good line, right there. 'Sabout time you started pumping the poetic vein again. Things were getting a little empty there for a while :P

Hehe, take care :)

Re: No thanks to Lissa not posting! That's right, you heard me! *backs away timidly* tactheantidog January 28 2006, 13:56:33 UTC

Haha, thanks! I'll try to be more active when I can!