Through the Looking Glass, Darkly

[luciferhisaki]

Title: Through the Looking Glass, Darkly
Author: Lucifer Hisaki (mercy_slays/luciferhisaki)
Rating: R
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Edward Elric/Roy Mustang
Summary: Oil and alchemic aftermath residue...
Disclaimer: You do not have a legal suit. So don't even try.
Notes: steelandsparks's entry for anniversary contest.
Word Count: 7045

Comments

[secretfreaky]

Very well done! It was so disturbing at first: all the flashbacks and guilt. The ending was sweet without being gushy.

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[frenchie7]

. . . Wow!

I'm slightly crying with the way it ended. From happyness and sadness because I feel like Roy and how he's no longer going to see Edward and that's a pain I won't be getting rid of until get some air or something. I'm happy Roy's listening to Ed's 'ego boost'. He'd make a good Fuhrer.

So powerful. The details are my sugar. I love LONG stories like this because I know the writer spent time on feelings and thoughts and that's what affects me most.

Very good! Yummy!

-Frenchie7

[peppermintwords]

I want you to know that I really loved this story. It was poignant and beautifully-written, so vivid that I could picture everything :).

[orion117]

I really enjoyed reading this. The way you used all of his senses during the dream sequences made it really powerful.