Roy groans softly into the flesh of his forearm; pants bundled at his thighs, jacket and undershirt in disarray but still covering him albeit barely (a button or two of his jacket’s fastenings have disappeared, the collar is wrinkled, cuffs crinkled). He lies on the top of his desk: legs spread, back arched; fingers of his other arm clenching the
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Pending name right now for the sequel is~:
Revolution and Restoration
It might change though. =d;;;
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And the reason why I was nervous as anything when I saw you had also picked up this prompt. I almost dropped it because I knew I couldn't live up to what you normally write.
Still...beautifully done.
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Thank you though. =D This was actually my third draft of writing this fic. Doesn't help that I speak better in a Roy PoV voice than an Jean's either. ^^;
The first two had more of a real Jean/Ed back story or scene in which Ed was the one to actually dare Jean to have sex with Roy in an effort to make Roy more normal, but yet, I don't think I really needed that said in this fic considering the last scene between the two. =d;;
Not that it probably won't come up again in the sequel!
Haha. Thanks again!
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(I hope that you’re not scared by a crazy fangal like me ^^”)
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You're definitely not the first one to want blood for the Roy back story hintage I threw in here, probably won't be the last one either. I personally want to torture them all for making this Roy just seem more... well... meek or something like that. ^^;
I'll try to get the sequel up and running soon though!
(And no, I'm not scared. I like fans!)
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This was delightfully hot and with the whole thing being in the 'now' from Roy's POV made it all the better, with his desire and worry and all the other emotions mixed up inside. I would love to see a sequel to this.
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And yes, it does seem to be better if it was more of "in the moment" fic then it would have been if I just did a full real multiple scene story. ^^;
Just make sure to look out for one. ^^ I am planning on writing a sequel to this soon~, hopefully real soon. ^^;
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I'm glad you got the eavesdropping feeling because that was sorta what I was intending in writing this fic. ^^
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