Restriction and Release

Jul 04, 2007 01:26


Roy groans softly into the flesh of his forearm; pants bundled at his thighs, jacket and undershirt in disarray but still covering him albeit barely (a button or two of his jacket’s fastenings have disappeared, the collar is wrinkled, cuffs crinkled). He lies on the top of his desk: legs spread, back arched; fingers of his other arm clenching the ( Read more... )

character: jean havoc, misc: claim, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, rating: nc-17, community: springkink, character: roy mustang, post: fan fiction, character: edward elric

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ladyshadowphyre July 4 2007, 08:49:13 UTC
~apologetic~ I have to agree with you. There pretty much has to be a sequel now. With Ed and Jean (and probably as many of Roy's command as they can pull into it without completely betraying the why of it) extracting some delightfully subtle and humiliating revenge on Hakuro and whoever else has turned Roy into... this.

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mercy_slays July 6 2007, 03:21:41 UTC
Oh, I knew I talked to you about this but yeah... I had actually planned to make this longer but Post-AX mindset? Hell, no. I can't do that. I'm too exhausted, physically and mentally to do anything like that. Besides... unlike my other war-esque sequels stuck in my head, the sequel is going to be more of a political-based story, though I might toss in a War scenario or something because I like that. ^^;

Pending name right now for the sequel is~:

Revolution and Restoration

It might change though. =d;;;

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toxictattoo July 4 2007, 11:44:34 UTC
That was insanely hot.

And the reason why I was nervous as anything when I saw you had also picked up this prompt. I almost dropped it because I knew I couldn't live up to what you normally write.

Still...beautifully done.

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mercy_slays July 6 2007, 03:28:08 UTC
-laughs- No, don't be nervous! Yours was wonderful too but I just had an idea and a not so helpful idea to make it a threesome due to some certain "people" I talk to on MSN. ^^

Thank you though. =D This was actually my third draft of writing this fic. Doesn't help that I speak better in a Roy PoV voice than an Jean's either. ^^;

The first two had more of a real Jean/Ed back story or scene in which Ed was the one to actually dare Jean to have sex with Roy in an effort to make Roy more normal, but yet, I don't think I really needed that said in this fic considering the last scene between the two. =d;;

Not that it probably won't come up again in the sequel!

Haha. Thanks again!

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trifota July 4 2007, 11:53:49 UTC
Uh, hi? Well, I just found the community recently (spelling: now heh) and I just have to read THIS FIC as soon as I laid an eye on it and, and, and. (took a very deep breath) I LOVE THIS FIC!! Roy, oh Roy, his pain broke my heart. T^T Those two blonds should take a GOOD care of him now that their decided to make a move humm. And I don’t forget a bit about those bastard higher up there, I want their blood *smile sweetly*. So, a happy sequel, pretty please?

(I hope that you’re not scared by a crazy fangal like me ^^”)

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mercy_slays July 6 2007, 04:43:38 UTC
We'll see how much they can convince Roy in the sequel and though it would be more Drama and Politics, I can't exactly say there will be a happy ending just yet. Probably will have one but~... Yeah, you never know. ^^;

You're definitely not the first one to want blood for the Roy back story hintage I threw in here, probably won't be the last one either. I personally want to torture them all for making this Roy just seem more... well... meek or something like that. ^^;

I'll try to get the sequel up and running soon though!

(And no, I'm not scared. I like fans!)

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fractured_chaos July 4 2007, 13:08:48 UTC
I eagerly ready just about everything you write... but DAYUM. O.o;;

This was delightfully hot and with the whole thing being in the 'now' from Roy's POV made it all the better, with his desire and worry and all the other emotions mixed up inside. I would love to see a sequel to this.

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mercy_slays July 6 2007, 05:48:05 UTC
Thanks! =D I am to please. ^^

And yes, it does seem to be better if it was more of "in the moment" fic then it would have been if I just did a full real multiple scene story. ^^;

Just make sure to look out for one. ^^ I am planning on writing a sequel to this soon~, hopefully real soon. ^^;

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l_p_e_rson July 4 2007, 14:29:56 UTC
i cannot go by without having at least said that i have read it... it feels like eaves dropping... did enjoy the end though, was worth it after reading through the other, more caring than indulging... it sounded exciting (sexually), lperson.

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mercy_slays July 6 2007, 05:48:59 UTC
Thank you!

I'm glad you got the eavesdropping feeling because that was sorta what I was intending in writing this fic. ^^

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