Repetition Undenied

[luciferhisaki]

Title: Repetition Undenied
Author: Lucifer Hisaki (mercy_slays/luciferhisaki)
Rating: PG
Fandom: Blood+
Pairing: David/Kai Miyagusuku
Summary: David moves from day to day...
Word Count: 205
For: 10pastryhearts's week #6 challenge prompt: Patterns

Comments

[pekori]

Admittedly, I've seen maybe a handful of episodes of Blood+, but you wrote this in a way that doesn't alienate me, which can get very tricky, especially with all of those subtleties in the text. However, my favorite part of all was your clever use of structural patterns in the writing. Very, very impressed. ^^

well done

[anonymous]

thats for sure, dude