Comments | lucindathemaid: Maybe I can write them like individuals next time.

lucindathemaid

Maybe I can write them like individuals next time.

Mar 05, 2007 22:36

I have an essay to write.

Enjoy some Riku/Sora.

( The prompt was 'good night,' and I'm doing my best to not completely abhor everything that I write. This one's for you, thirty kisses. )

Comments 8

lightbird777 March 6 2007, 04:02:36 UTC

Ooh, excellent first kiss. I love this pairing and you're doing a great job already. Can't wait to read the rest!

lucindathemaid March 6 2007, 21:39:00 UTC

*waves little flag of OTP* XD

Thank you so much!

candy__chan March 6 2007, 04:04:08 UTC

Humina humina!! :D :D :D Much love!!

lucindathemaid March 6 2007, 21:39:20 UTC

*glees*

Thank you! ^__^

aamalie March 6 2007, 15:20:17 UTC

You're corrupting me, girl. Corrupting meeee...!

Lovely piece though. The progression from day to night, with the little alteration at the end? Very nice. And the bit with the doorway was doubly nifty, because of the way it can represent so much.

*applauds*

lucindathemaid March 6 2007, 21:40:30 UTC

I will make you love this pairing. Quite possibly more than you already do.

^_^ Final cutscene flashbacks, wut.

Thank you, darlin'. *hugs*

lapifors March 6 2007, 16:09:53 UTC

As with the above, I love the progression with this, and the way you changed the last line to give it that final impact. Very nice :)

lucindathemaid March 6 2007, 21:40:45 UTC

^____^

Thank you!