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SM_Monthly Day 10 - Plan

Jan 13, 2009 13:19

Title: The best-laid plans of mice and men...
Author: LucKie355
Theme: Plan
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Version: AU-ish
Rating: PG for one small swear

( ...often go awry )

Comments 6

mrcrybrilliance January 13 2009, 19:46:23 UTC

HUN! This is awesomesauce!

The next time you denigrate your abilities, I'm going to thwap you. :)

Seriously, I was laughing and smiling and awwing. Just so much wonderfulness.

I LOVE that Jason saw Makoto changing.

This is beautiful, hun. It really is.

jenbunny January 13 2009, 20:07:45 UTC

I agree ... this is fabulous ^^. I enjoyed it very much. Don't try to tell me that you can't write again. You did a great job!

pocketsprite January 14 2009, 14:06:57 UTC

Oh, that was so cute! I probably shouldn't have spent the entire story giggling at Nephrite's expense, but really, I couldn't help it. I love the way everyone pitched in to help him, and how very clear his devotion to Makoto is. ♥

Thanks for sharing!

charliechaplin2 February 8 2009, 17:33:25 UTC

AWWWWW!! Smushes and huggles, this is so adorably CUTE!!!!!!! I love it! I think my favourite part was definitely when Jade's hand shot out from the bed and left the box by Neph's feet. KAWAII!

luckie355 February 8 2009, 18:32:29 UTC

Thanks so much, hon! ^_^

vaberella October 14 2009, 07:21:33 UTC

WAhhh a Mako/Neph story. I liked it. Not many of this pairings stories around so this was a fun and exciting read. Poor Neph, I got your info from VO1's site of SM_Monthly.