Fic: Your Littlest Sin

Jun 04, 2011 01:47

Title: Your Littlest Sin
Author: lucklessforhim
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 / Language, sexual content.
Word Count: ~3750
Pairings: Jesse/Rachel
Summary: I'm tired of who I am, you were my greatest mistake, I fell in love with your sin. / a loose fill for glee_kink_meme prompt HERE
Spoilers: Journey to Regionals and Funk.
Disclaimer: I do not own Glee or any of ( Read more... )

fic pairing: jesse/rachel, fic, fic: glee

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missgoalie75 June 7 2011, 05:33:36 UTC
GAH! I've been meaning to read this, but then I forgot because I'm a spaz, but then I remembered, so here I am.

I love how obvious it was that they hated each other, but at the same time, there was that undercurrent of tension that only exists because they're so fucking perfect for one another and they can't hate each other for it.

It hurt. It hurt so much, and Rachel desperately reminded herself to breathe. She forced air in and out of her lungs, gripping Jesse’s hot pink shirtsleeves, waiting for the good part. This line HURT.

Amazing, amazing, amazing.

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lucklessforhim June 7 2011, 05:42:28 UTC
Hee! No worries! I'm glad you're here to read. ;-)

That is EXACTLY it. They're angry and they hate each other, but the hate is only there because of the anger and once that's gone...where will they be?

Oh, my. Thank you, thank you, thank you. ♥

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lucklessforhim July 3 2011, 06:59:57 UTC
Everyone seems to want one, so I guess I have to, right? :D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! It's always so great to hear that they were in-character. ♥

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lucklessforhim July 3 2011, 07:23:33 UTC
I'll need a break from this BigBang at some point, and I never say never. Of anything, I am most likely to follow up on this one. ;-)

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vyedubois July 24 2011, 14:21:04 UTC
Oh my gosh the most delicious angst ever written

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lucklessforhim July 24 2011, 16:35:37 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

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