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Apr 27, 2009 19:42

The onlookers were anxious, Anne could tell by their facial expressions. A bead of sweat started forming on her brow, the pressure had been mounting for almost a full hour now and if a decision was not made, the consequences would be dire. Thoughts of the past six months flooded Anne’s perception; the student loans, the new house, the upcoming ( Read more... )

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dancsingrl287 April 28 2006, 21:03:33 UTC
thats amazing.

hahhaa

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