Tags, a Twilight fanfiction

[luckyj52587]

Is it a good idea to edit/post a story at 1 in the morning? Probably not, as I'm pretty tired. But - oh well, too late now. I've been talking about this story for months, and it's finally here! Not sure what you all were expecting, but....we'll see how you like it.

Comments

[dbn_broberg]

Yay! - your Jalice story is here :-D

I'm liking it so fare - the characters seems to be canon. And I like it that Alice is already drawn to Jasper.

So I've put it on story alert :-D

[luckyj52587]

So I've put it on story alert

Haha great. I'm trying to keep the character canon (I mean, minus the whole vampire thing), so we'll see how it goes :)

Question: were all the different viewpoints confusing? I mean, I'm going to keep having varying POVs but was it confusing to have that many in 1 chapter?

[dbn_broberg]

Answer: no not really - it is understandable that you needed many different POVs in the first chapter since you had to get the story going. If it was too many - no I don't think so - but on the other hand I don't think you should have much more then what you did in chapter 1 - then rather divide the chapters in smaller sections.

Was that even an answer to your question :-D

[luckyj52587]

Yes that was an answer! That is what I've been wondering.

[izhiru]

Thanks.. for using the banner.. ^^

[luckyj52587]

Thanks for making it! :)

[kem722]

Oh yay! This was a perfect way to start my day!! This is a great start to what I'm sure will be a fantastic story. I love Jasper already even if he is all tortured and what-not:) Can't wait for more!

[luckyj52587]

Thanks!

Question: were all the different viewpoints confusing? I mean, I'm going to keep having varying POVs but was it confusing to have that many in 1 chapter?

[kem722]

I don't think the different viewpoints were confusing. I think it worked. Each one was different enough that it was easy to follow, you know?

[luckyj52587]

I'm so glad to hear it! And I'm glad you like the Rosalie/Jasper dynamic. I love the both of them and find their relationship intriguing, so even though this will be Jalice after Jasper and Alice meet, I couldn't help myself from having the Rosalie/Jasper interactions in the beginning.

Thanks bb! :)

[realynn8]

Hey sweetie!

Just wanted to drop you a line letting you know I didn't miss this. I will read it soon, just can't at the moment. I've saved the link and am really looking forward to it!

[luckyj52587]

:)