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Sep 15, 2006 12:35

Because, clearly, I need the proper amount of people yelling at me and complimenting me in order to produce anything. I may be just a wee bit effed up ( Read more... )

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13_moons September 15 2006, 19:01:01 UTC
Yay! An update! Thank you, thank you! I don't know if I managed to comment on the other ones, but I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next.
For some reason, my mouse doesn't want to let me highlight so I can't quote right now, but I particularly loved the bit about Draco's kisses being absent of teasing and sneering, and his eyes clear and seeking. Very nice and this:

"You feel like home."

So sweet!*sigh*

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aquila_star September 15 2006, 19:35:16 UTC
This is lovely. It's in character and it's real, not just people on a page, they feel so realistic and the emotions and words are so genuine. I am really loving this series. I'm glad it's not over. *grins*

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sweetest_ink September 15 2006, 19:41:52 UTC
Ok, consider this yelling: THAT WAS AWESOME. Write more. If you have any doubts about whether or not to write then ask me and I will tell you, 'yes, do.' ^_^

Fights like this are so realistic and it just sweetens the whole H/D pie even more. They are so heinous to each other, but so sweet too. That, to me, is often the way life is. It's beautiful and I'm soo glad you decided to update. Also, did I mention that I like your combination of Bottom!Draco and Uppity!Draco? Cause it works really well.

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lilliputian722 September 15 2006, 20:21:50 UTC
*mwah*
Kisses for you for updating this! I love this story...Draco's vulnerabilities and Harry's uncertainties make this unbeatable!

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subtleline September 15 2006, 22:57:59 UTC
So I just wandered upon this from one of the harry/draco comms. And I only have one thing to say.

I think I may love. We'll need another chapter to confirm it and then a couple more before a proposal but the possiblity is there.

I just love your Hary and Draco. A perfect mix of canon and fanon. A dominant/submissive Draco is just perfect. And Harry so sweet, innocent and confused but when he finally grasps the concept, the slyth shows.

And I love the pace because these two never would take things slowly. They were too involved with to take anything slowly. And I especially loved that Draco made the first physical move but Harry made the first emotional move.

It is just beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

Naz.

p.s. can I friend you?

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luckyrory7 September 15 2006, 23:58:14 UTC
Thanks for the comments! And yes, of course, friend away!

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