Whore!JC, part five - "Clean."

Oct 10, 2002 03:31

Whore!JC, the last bit. And. Well. Yes.

I don't know. I just write this stuff down, okay?

Clean. )

whore!jc

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kaffy_smaffy October 10 2002, 04:00:59 UTC
*sniff* so sweet and lovely. Such a wonderful way to end the story. You made it so that it was believable and *sigh* perfect

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lucy_fic October 13 2002, 22:49:01 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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thebitchtrolls October 10 2002, 04:38:41 UTC
Okay, that was good. I feel.... sated. It's not all neatly tied up, 'cause that doesn't happen, but it's hopeful. AJ and JC are getting their shit together, Lance is still just Lance and there was personal growth and Pretty Woman jokes.

And Wade! Waaaaade! All businesslike with an edge of sleaze. I'm not unhappy at all, he's all AU but still the same hardass, ambitious little fucked-up prodigy. Aaaaaw.

Now I'm sad, though. If the series is over, there won't be any more hooker-with-a-hear-of-aluminium Lance or porn-lord Wade. And they won't meet up! I think they'd have got along well.

Ah well, I'll imagine they met. *imagines*

- Lennie.

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lucy_fic October 13 2002, 22:50:06 UTC
Hee! Man, the thought of them together is so delicious I may have to do that off-shoot story. . . "Hooker with a heart of aluminum," indeed. :)

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Re: thebitchtrolls October 15 2002, 19:28:57 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!

*begs* Pleasepleaseplease? They'd be so cute and bitchy and sharp and always pushing and testing and trying to out-smart each other...

- Lennie.

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Um. Yes. lvndr_flutterby October 10 2002, 06:29:06 UTC
*big cheesey grin* Pure perfection, Lucy. I loved every minute of this series, even the parts that made me hurt. And the snuggling on the couch? Yes. And the Porn Star!JC? Yes. And the sweetness? Yes. And the Poor Baby doesn't like needles? Yes. And the Hamster comment? Yes. And most of all you didn't play the fluff card and just turn it into a "kiss and make up and they live happily ever after." That's shows integrity cause you could've but chose not to, fluffy badfic is... well... for lack of a better word "bad". You are most definately my Queen! You deserve a half nekkid SDB in your bed for at least a year!

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Re: Um. Yes. lucy_fic October 13 2002, 22:51:21 UTC
Only a year? ;) Thanks, hon.

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gsfan84 October 10 2002, 06:51:47 UTC
Awww Lucy, that story was just...wow. And just. You had everything there that would be after a relationship was "over"...and it makes AJ look sooo innocent and I love innocentlike!AJ...hehe okay...I'm done now. :)

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lucy_fic October 13 2002, 22:52:03 UTC
Thanks. :) Glad you enjoyed it.

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eyesfullofhope October 10 2002, 07:40:44 UTC
what a perfect ending.

It gave me goosebumps, honestly.

I'm so sad it's over but you ended it so wonderfully I can't be too unhappy.

such a beautiful story, definitely on my favorite ever list.

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lucy_fic October 13 2002, 22:52:44 UTC
Aww, thank you, sweetie. :)

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