I am trying to proof-read a whole document of this stuff...

Apr 14, 2010 15:12

"The above data streams inform how we reach overall conclusions as to the state of health of our relationships with schools, which can then be recorded in the summative overview matrix within our SLEF, thus informing the next iteration of enquiry-based development of our cyclical approach."

Why don't they teach academics to write in plain English

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undyingking April 14 2010, 15:11:11 UTC
There's something very sinister-sounding about "the summative overview matrix within our SLEF".

Presumably a SLEF is some sort of alien mind parasite that rides on their shoulder.

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