Fic: I Long for the Raised Voice

[lucybun]

 

Comments

[lillianone]

He had just a second to recognize the complete absence of surprise in Sherlock’s eyes before the blow from the taller man’s fist connected with John’s chin and knocked his head back.

BWAHAHA, o how I loved this!

*still laughing*

[lucybun]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[mushroom18]

I love how you didn't focus on what made John angry--he just was. I'm PMS-ing a bit now and I completely feel for him.

Amazing, visceral work as always!

[lucybun]

Oh, thank you! Yeah, I wanted it to be about how sometimes we're all just foul and angry for no particular reason. I hate that you're PMS-ing, but I'm glad that it resonated with you. :D

[random_nexus]

WOOT! Yes!
(ooh, you added stuff, nice, bebe, vurra nice!)

This rocks, I really dig rage-filled!John and Sherlock having an impromptu 'therapy' session here. *wicked grin*

<3

[lucybun]

Thank you! And thank you for being such an awesome beta. You helped more than you can know! <3<3<3

[lucybun]

Oh, thank you! I'm thrilled that you could picture it like that, actually "see" the moment.

[tweedisgood]

Yes. Both of them on an edge, then tipping over, no, throwing themselves over and welcoming the hitting bottom. I can so see this dynamic and how it might work for them both. Great dialogue, too: not just the verbal but the non-verbal dialogue.

[lucybun]

Thank you so much! Yeah, they both have that self-destructive streak, don't they? You expressed the idea so well there. They do welcome hitting bottom... then they're going to have some rough sex while they're down there.