Wow. Well, Katy- to be completely honest, I like it. I like it a lot-- but I think that it's not as strong at the end... after "And I win." I'm not sure what it needs, though. Sorry I can't help you there, I've had a pretty shitty day. Maybe I'll post some of it on LJ. <3 Good luck tonight! I miss you!
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