[fic] Nabari no Ou: Four times Miharu failed (and the one time he succeeded)

[ludicmelody]

I've finally finished watching Nabari no Ou after ignoring pretty much half the series since April. And thanks to the anime, I'm now completely hooked on the manga I'm surprised how faithfully the anime followed the manga until chapter 40-something

I need moreeeeee. But whatever, I have a fic. Yeah, already.

Title: Four times Miharu failed (and

Comments

[lonelyblkviolet]

Oh, this is beautiful. I like how you split it, it's like Miharu's gradually getting closer to Yoite, but at the same time, they're being drifted apart. And the very last paragraph is so bittersweet and touching and brilliant.

I loved it. Amazing job.

[ludicmelody]

Thank you so much! I was actually really worried about this, it being my first fic for the series and characterization and all that. I'm glad you liked it.♥

The last paragraph along with part 3 was also my favourite. Bittersweet was exactly what I was aiming for, I'm happy it worked out~

[lonelyblkviolet]

Psst, I was just re-reading this, and I found a little mistake.

The tears don't stop.

<3

[ludicmelody]

Ah, thanks. That phrase has been bothering me for some time, but for some reason I couldn't really figure out what. Which is really sad. D:

fixed!

[anonymous]

so sad ;x; i love Yoite/Miharu and i can´t wait more, there´s only 9 chapters without yoite and i´m almost insane D:

[ludicmelody]

I hope it wasn't too sad. D:

Hahaha, I know right? but I have this strange feeling he's not going to be in it for a while.

[zanra]

waaaah this is lovely! ;__;

[ludicmelody]

Thanks~♥

[ludicmelody]

DD: I didn't mean to make it that sad

But yeah. Their relationship to me was tragic right from the beginning.♥

[ludicmelody]

Well no. I would love it if Miharu was able to stay with Yoite forever. But given the circumstances...

It's like they're fighting against time/fate.