Poetry

[ludzu_alus]

I wrote this near the beginning of my relationship with Joe. I remember feeling insecure and full of doubts. It was February of 2000 and I was 21. Joe was my first boyfriend, ever. My first real kiss. I wrote this while sitting outside my folks' house, in the woods. I believe we were having a birthday get-together for my sister, Katy, and our

Comments

[bigbadjayne]

This is beautiful..simply, beautiful. That's really the only thing that comes to mind. Other than of course, I think you should write and post more poetry. *smiles*

[in_omnia]

Oh. That's lovely, Lissa. I particularly like the part about the trees making sense of your thoughts and then giving them back to you. Beautiful. And eloquent. And poignant.

[basched]

Oh lass... it's so beautiful and moving.

Thanks for sharing this with us. :) *hugs*

Poetry

[anonymous]

Love You, Love thoughts, Love place of comfort