Heart's A Mess

[luhans]

Heart's A Mess
Kris/Suho, R, 1400 words
But he forgets that the stars are free. (alternate universe)
Warnings: mild angst, suggested sex scene.
I challenged myself to do a dialogue-free fic after being pretty much awed by hp_silencio. This is probably the first R-rated krisho I've ever wrote? Anyway, this was written along the way home from college, a.k.a it'

Comments

[poktanju6686]

At first I thought it's going to be an angst. But it turned out very sweet.
I love it.
Thanks for writing this

[luhans]

I'm a sucker for sweet fics, especially when it comes to my otp. Thus the twist.
Thank you, I'm glad you like it <3

[krishoislove]

ah this was so sweet! You really got me into Junmyeon's feelings, it was really intense :) and awww seriously though this was super a cute! A nice contrast of angst and fluff ^~^

[luhans]

heheh it was quite intense writing this as well...
yayyyy c:

[nappeungijibe]

UuU This is so cute huhihi
Joon must have missed Kris a lot that he combusted when kris got home but in the end they are good. thank you for writing this for mah ohteypey ^♡^

[luhans]

yeah, he held all his feelings back for too long and the dam just broke when yifan came c:
thank you for reading~

[mamalumimin]

aaah YAY FINALLY I GET TO READ THIS ;;;;;;;

THIS IS???LIKE?? ANGSTY FLUFFY SMUTTY FIC?? TTvTT
same with the first commenter, I thought we're gonna get angsty kh fic sobs I thought there will be no kris here but then he.. came.. back I
;______________________________; HE CAME BACK K RI S CAME BACK KR IS-
I enjoyed it ;w; and this is such a fresh change? bcs no dialogue at all but you managed to deliver the /feels/ really well.. I could totally picture how lonely jm in this fic and it breaks me ;;;;;

thanks for sharing this nurul-chan uwui'm sorry this is my first time commenting here altho you know how much I love all your kh fics ;;w;;

[luhans]

kakaaaaak <3

it's not quite smutty tho you have to zoom in rly well to see it lmao
you know i can't leave krsh angsting for too long. sniffs.
and and thank youuu i was afraid i would fail the free-dialogue concept T_T

yay i love tou too kak, thanks for loving my fics (& hopefully me as well lol)

[luhan001]

l love it eventhough it is very short to my liking... Keep writing. You are a great writer!

[luhans]

i apologize for the length ;;;;;;
thank you tho, & yes i will. no worries kkk