Found the fire that lights the candle that inspires

[luhnez]

Well, after seeing "8 Mile" three times, I finally found the fire that once burned inside of me. The fire where I would write rhymes at least 5 times a week. Anyway, I wrote a verse today and I wanna know what you guys think of it. There's nothing like actually hearing it to get all the rhyme patterns, but reading it gives you an idea. So be

Comments

[syrinis]

Very tight, we need to hear more of that live fool. Dont be scurred at the gatherings. Or you should get yourself up to norcal and try it SC style.

[ex_voideity541]

sweet. you should post more often luhnezo

[tardpenguin]

dayam heheh [as always] u amaze me. ::mwah::
seriously, its really good.

wow: f*******ck

[sexydonkey]

me like. a lot. way to bump and grind dude. and happy to hear you're back in the 'act'ion...;)P wasn't that last flow of his during the final battle scene in 8mile the shiat?!!

[hexumsgurl]

yay! welcome back mc luhnez