Ok, here you go.

[luigi_larosa]

For anyone who hasn't read my story yet, I'm posting it as one big piece as opposed to twelve chapters people have to find.  For people who've already seen it, ignore this.  It's the same thing, just formatted a little differently.

Here you go.

Comments

[marajade893]

Hey, read it! That's just excellent. It makes me feel better about sad things in general. That's pretty special. Its got a lot to it. I don't have a critical bone in my body, heh. Sorry I can't give you more in that vain. And to be perfectly cliché, keep it coming.

[luigi_larosa]

Don't worry about not giving criticism, I would appreciate it, but it's more important to me that you read it than you commented on it. Thanks Brita, and I will keep it coming.