Comments | lukesaysno: Fic: Wishes

lukesaysno

Fic: Wishes

Feb 13, 2005 18:30

25 January 2005
Title:Wishes
Author: Orli
Pairing: Boone/Shannon
Rating: PG
Summary: 100 words. Hearts and Minds scene when Boone is staring at Shannon (before Sayid comes), so that means this whole fic is before Boone "moves on". No warnings except the pairing.
Cross-posted at lost100 , ficinabottle, shannon_boone, lost_fanficHe still loves her. After the hell she’s put him through, ( Read more... )

fic, lost

Comments 14

hahahaha bucketofboredom February 13 2005, 18:28:02 UTC

that last line was NASTY

Re: hahahaha yndigot February 13 2005, 18:42:08 UTC

erm ... I didn't think that until you said it, but it is an interesting double meaning.

Nicely done.

Re: hahahaha lukesaysno February 13 2005, 19:10:57 UTC

thanks (if you're talking me).

Re: hahahaha yndigot February 13 2005, 19:13:34 UTC

The first bit, no (except for the double meaning ... was that intentional? *giggle* oOo, I'm so immature), the second bit, most certainly.

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lauraspeak February 13 2005, 19:42:37 UTC

Aww. *comfort pets fictional-Boone*

lukesaysno February 13 2005, 20:27:31 UTC

*comfort pets fictional-Boone*

lol.. we wish, don't we? thanks

eponine119 February 13 2005, 19:54:45 UTC

This was really well done. It's hard to pack meaning into the 100-word format, but you state a simple case here and it works. It's true to the character and kind of touching.

Of course, I think she does love him, so...

lukesaysno February 13 2005, 20:29:04 UTC

thanks. yeah, it is hard, but its great exercise. you learn not to drag on and how to use the least amount of words to get the most meaning.

yeah, shannon justs needs some work showing it.

belleimani February 20 2005, 22:50:47 UTC

Damn.
Vicious.
I like.

lukesaysno February 21 2005, 04:53:35 UTC

thanks :D