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[lukifer1129]

Midnight. The wind stung my watery eyes; I put my head down and continued walking. The eroded remains of a sidewalk passed beneath my feet - fractured pieces of cement embedded in the cold earth. A blistering cold breeze crept down the back of my neck like needles tearing into my skin - I shivered. I could see it further ahead... "Almost there

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interesting

[thekornchylde]

that was an interesting piece of writing... a little disturbing... but it's the creepy disturbing people that give this boring life a little unexpected twist

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[lukifer1129]

Hey thanks for the input, I appreciate it. You're right though... I am creepy.

-Luke

[bishop610]

If you drop the "What are you looking at, my dear?" part, that'll be the first impressive thing you've ever written. Fuck you. It's awesome. I love it. You're a fucking creep. I'm proud.

-Brian

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[lukifer1129]

Thanks man - I'm glad that you enjoyed it..