FIC: Connor's First Christmas! (Part 3)

Jan 03, 2008 18:42

Title: Connor's First Christmas (Part 3)
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christmas, connor, fanfic, angel

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nocturnal08 January 4 2008, 02:50:36 UTC
omg, shopping with an unruly teen. I'm sure that'll go over well :)

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lullaby_gg January 5 2008, 22:24:43 UTC
Shopping with Connor may be a little difficult but shopping with Spike AND Connor I bet it's gonna be nearly impossible. Oh, I'm so mean to Angel... hehehe. But I'll see what I can come up with. I'm still having a hard time figuring out what their presents should be...
Anyhow, thanks so much for your comment makes me happy that you like it :)

Hugs,
Gisela

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nocturnal08 January 6 2008, 06:10:30 UTC
you have no idea how much I want Spike's "Grand-sire" to take him in hand. How about Connor gets spanked for some naughtiness that Spike led him into and he's all, like, "I thought we were brothers", how come *I'm* the only one who gets punished? :)

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lullaby_gg January 6 2008, 06:31:17 UTC
Wow! That's a pretty good idea! I was actually planning a lot of mischief at the mall instigated by Spike just to annoy Angel... and maybe what you said would work... although I have never written something with Angel spanking Spike... I don't know how well that'll go... but I sure'll give it a shot. Sounds like a wonderful idea... I'll try to do my best but hehehe... I don't know if I could be really hard on the boys. After all I'm setting that on Christmas eve... oh well... we'll see how it goes!
Thanks again for the nice idea! Be sure that I'll use it one way or the other!

Hugs,
Gisela

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aldo_77 January 4 2008, 07:35:05 UTC
OMG!!! Your Connor is absolutely, the cutest Connor EVER!
You outdid yourself with this one, the story just keep´s getting better and better!

Did he just call him a fruit?

LOL!!!

Everyones voices is just spot on. I love how Angel tries to sneak in a little fatherly tenderness (like lifting Connor so he can reach the top of the tree, just like he would do if he was little) and that Connor swings from somehow hostile (if you can call it that) to utterly innocent and then back again. Yet always so eager and full of questions<3
I can´t wait for the new part!!

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lullaby_gg January 5 2008, 22:35:36 UTC
You so make me blush with your comment! It was really meant for you to like it so I'm glad I'm kind of doing something right! LOL...
Oh and I liked that line in particular too. I just had to put it in there somewhere. LOL.
I *adore* fatherly Angel so it's really how I always write him. I just can't cope with the cold one that seemed to care for every living thing in this world but Connor. I hated that.
And Connor switching moods, well, I have to say that's pretty much my personality... let's face it, I'm pretty much still in the teenage angst myself, LOL. I may not be as innocent as Connor but the hostility I can relate to. *wink*

Thanks so much again... although I have to say the next part may take a while longer since right now I'm busy "studying" for my German exam which is next week and then after that I still have to figure out the presents for them!!!

Hmm... I'll try to come up with something... I hope :S

Hugs,
Gisela :)

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mig2007 January 5 2008, 00:40:08 UTC
Muy bueno Gisela!! me reí mucho cómo todo resultó ser culpa de Angel
""Oh, sweetie, don’t worry. I’m sure it wasn’t your intention. Your father must have done something to upset you…” Cordy came and hugged the teenager.

“And why is suddenly everything that happens around here my fault?” Angel yelled at no one in particular. This was so not his day. If he could any get gray hair now he was sure he’d be the perfect image of an old man right this second.""
Me pareció muy tierno que decoraran juntos el árbol.

mmhhh, te debo la ayuda con respecto a qué regalarse.... lo pienso un poco más y si se me ocurre algo te aviso ;-)

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lullaby_gg January 5 2008, 22:40:34 UTC
Awww Muchas Gracias Marta! Me alegra muchísimo que te haya gustado! Y si, la verdad es que me encanta ser mala con Angel y tierna con Connor, jejeje. Uno de verdad que no puede enojarse con alguien como él.
La decoración del árbol fue una de mis partes favoritas y me da gusto que te haya parecido tierno :)

Muchas gracias por el comentario tan lindo... y la verdad es que cualquier ayuda con respecto a los regalos sería bienvenida, estoy bastante perdida con respecto a eso, jejeje. Te agradecería mucho cualquier idea!

Cuídate mucho, saludos,
Gisela

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astrangerfate January 7 2008, 00:02:34 UTC
Oh, that was lovely! Sorry I'm so late commenting; I'm a little behind (again.) Spike is my favorite character and I absolutely loved him here. :) Can't wait to read the rest!

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lullaby_gg January 7 2008, 06:49:37 UTC
Oh don't worry! I'm always late commenting or doing stuff I'm supposed to do. LOL. Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I'm glad that you liked it, because Spike's one of my favorites too and I really tried to do my best in writing him. LOL.
Ohh.. and he's going to really create a lot of mischief in next part!
Thanks again! :)

~ Gisela

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luvspnl January 7 2008, 21:20:32 UTC
Great chapter Gisela! I absolutely loved it! Spike is love! His statement about being brothers was sweet, even if he said it to manipulate Connor. I love the patience, even if it's forced, that Angel has with his son. I liked that his explanations weren't whought out and kind of surprised him a little. Cordy really has her priorities straight right? LoL. heading over ot the tree without even noticing Spike. That is SO her!

I loved how Angel explained decorating the tree like tying up a prisoner to get his son to understand. That was oddly enough very cute! And him picking up Connor to place the star!!! Best moment!

Can't wait to see what troubles Spike and Connor will cause alone with Angel. At least he has his 'youth' right? That way it won't be too hard to chase after them. LoL.

Saludos!
Ann

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lullaby_gg January 7 2008, 23:25:01 UTC
You're so right! Spike is looove (a little misunderstood, but love in the end)! I'm really happy that you liked this chapter. Spike's a little manipulative, isn't he? LOL!
I love Cordy... I don't know why but her comments always seem funny to me and she's the one forcing Angel to do all kinds of stuff he doesn't want to do (just to please me)... hehehe.
My favorite moment was when Angel lifted up Connor to place the star too... I just kept playing the scene over and over again in my head until I finally wrote it.
Oh and the things that Spike's gonna cause... my poor Connor's gonna listen to him... let's hope he doesn't end in too much trouble! It will be a lot of exercise for Angel, I think...

Thanks for the lovely comment... glad you liked it... and just so you know I'm looking for a place to watch PB online since thanks to your fic now I'm hooked and want to know more about it... LOL!

Saludos... Cuídate mucho!
Gisela :D

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luvspnl January 8 2008, 00:02:40 UTC
Yah! I made you want to watch it :D LoL I sometimes go to this site http://www.prisonbreakmanhunt.com/, I think you can download or watch the show from there.

Saludos!
Ann

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lullaby_gg January 9 2008, 06:21:28 UTC
It's really a good show! I've only watched two episodes but it seems good. LOL. I guess I'll know a little more about the brothers and LJ (who seems to hate his father up til now) later because right now it's pretty much the case and the setting. But it seems great. I would love to know more about PB brotherly fics (like the one you wrote)... do you know any? :D

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