Comments | lulledbyscreams: Watch Over Me- 13/?

lulledbyscreams

Watch Over Me- 13/?

Aug 17, 2012 00:49

[Title] Watch Over Me
[Pairing] Haehyuk
[Genre] Romance/Fluff/Family AU
[Rating] PG
[Summary] Coming to the rescue of Donghae, whose brother died in a car accident with his wife, Hyukjae suddenly finds himself as the nanny of 6 year Kyuhyun and 4 year old Jino.
[Warning] Older Donghae (25) and younger Hyukjae (21).

( ...this was not going to be good news. )

type: multichaptered, genre: fluff, genre: romance, genre: drama, genre: family au, fic: watch over me, rating: pg

Comments 93

masupeerman August 18 2012, 09:22:59 UTC

UPDATE!!!! /cries/
Hyukjae is acting more and more like a wife/mother.. Keke, I really love it!!
And he's starting to feel something towards Donghae~~ Yaay~
Can't Hyuk move back in now? Even Kyu is feeling more lonely now that he's not around.. JUST GET MARRIED TO DONGHAE, THEN YOU CAN MOVE IN!!!!
I love reading this story, it's one of my absolute favorites <3 Looking forward to the next upadte ^^
Thank you!!

lulledbyscreams August 20 2012, 04:59:31 UTC

hyuk is just horribly, and terribly in denial. though it might help to make up his mind if donghae's actual feelings were more clear too...
lol, i don't know. it seems a bit to easy to just make him move back so quickly. but maybe this will make him consider it?
aww, thank you so much! that's so sweet of you to say >//< i'm so happy you're enjoying it!
and thank you for reading and commenting ^^
i'll try to have an update up soon~ ^^v

hiothielpeldras August 18 2012, 10:12:06 UTC

don't worry for the 'no-fluffy' part.
this story of yours is developing really well ^__^
keep on writing! I'll be waiting :)

lulledbyscreams August 20 2012, 05:00:34 UTC

ah, that's a relief! i'm glad you think so!
and thank you! :D
thank you for reading and commenting ^^

michikachan101 August 18 2012, 10:29:55 UTC

The way Kyu acts, is simply solidifying how big an impact Hyukkie has on this family...it's like what Wookie said a couple chapters ago has already come true. The family can't function without Hyukkie because the kids-unknowingly-have replaced Hae as their dad and Hyukkie as their mom. So naturally, Kyu who has already been insecure since the loss of his parents would rebel/try to gain attention at the potential loss of his 'mom ( ... )

lulledbyscreams August 20 2012, 05:08:18 UTC

you're right. although ryeowook's intentions were good, unfortunately it was just a bit too late. hyukjae's gonna have to make a decision about what to do now. (and hyukjae realizing his feeling soon would really make things a lot easier orz)
but i'm glad you enjoyed the update ^_^
and i'll try ^^v
*takes cookies and brownies (homemade?! that's a plus) and opens up new word document
thanks for reading and commenting ^^

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lulledbyscreams August 20 2012, 05:10:11 UTC

won't ^^v
and i'm glad you like it C:
thank you for reading and commenting ^^

lovehyuk_suju August 18 2012, 11:15:31 UTC

Oh gosh... SPOT please! I'll be back!!

lovehyuk_suju August 19 2012, 20:24:51 UTC

soo...um wow... yeah i'm speechless! the beginning was so fluffy and cute with Jino and Hae both annoying Hyukkie with the shopping cart... and then BAM! all fluffiness is GONE ( ... )

lulledbyscreams August 20 2012, 08:14:04 UTC

hi maij!!! ^_^
and yeah, that was kinda abrupt ^^;
yup, they were. and i was actually going to make hyukjae say something about it, but i just couldn't find a way for it to fit in, so i just made him gesture to the kids as a kind of a roundabout way to say it, i guess.. idk orz
and trust me, hae's mad at himself for yelling at hyukkie too >.<
and ikr! i was all upset typing it up and my sister came over asking me why was i frowning so much at my screen. i was all "cause i'm making bb kyu cry!"
she was all >_> "...weirdo"
but anyways, hyuk doe shave a decision to make. i just hope it's the right one
and it's no problem! thank you for reading ^^
<3333
oh, and your matching eunhae pouting icons are so cute!!!! n_n