Sunken in the Quicksands of Love

Feb 25, 2010 04:51

Title: Sunken in the Quicksands of Love
Author: lumberxjill  
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: As far as I know, this is all fiction.
Words: 2,500
Summary: And Ryan had to spend twenty minutes listening to Brendon explain all about how, since he had grown up without it, he liked to make sure there was as much caffeine as possible in everything he ( Read more... )

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melody_so_sweet February 25 2010, 09:52:19 UTC
FC, NATURALLY. FYEAH.

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melody_so_sweet February 25 2010, 10:19:45 UTC
At 11 a.m, it’s a couple of hours too early for the him to even consider being awake
Honestly, Ryan. it's 11am. Even /I/ allow people to wake me up at 11.

And Ryan had to spend twenty minutes listening to Brendon explain all about how, since he had grown up without it, he liked to make sure there was as much caffeine as possible in everything he ate and drank.
Characterizationnnnnnn. <3

"Well, I could squeeze you. You're pretty sour,"
I stand by my previous statement as this is my favorite line in ANYTHING. EVER. /EVER/.

"I'm just a girl, standing in front of a boy, asking him to love me,"
Oh god bden. How are you so perfect.

"Ry, it has a tiny, talking, sarcastic dragon. Yes, we are so watching it"
This line screams, "HEY, I WAS WRITTEN BY RACHEL, AND I'M AWESOME." Just sayin.

The next morning, Ryan wakes up with his thin arms full of Brendon.
Firstly, I'd like to say that I am jealous. Secondly, I love your syntax.

"Ta-da! The breakfast of champions!" Brendon proclaims as he places the food he had just prepared for ( ... )

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lumberxjill February 26 2010, 01:50:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

<3

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lumberxjill February 26 2010, 01:51:11 UTC
Oh wow, thank you =)

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psychoxdreams February 26 2010, 15:21:40 UTC
that was SO adorable. brendon got a ryannnn brendon got a ryyaaaaan :'D -dies-

"No Brendon, I don't have any lemonade. I don't have any lemons either, so you can't make any," he snaps, crossing his arms haughtily and scowling in Brendon's general direction.

Brendon turns back to look at him with a frown.

"Well, I could squeeze you. You're pretty sour," he states with one hand on his hip and a smile tugging lightly at the left side of his mouth.

Ryan's heart flutters and he isn't sure why.

I LOVE THAT PART SO MUCHHHHH♥

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lumberxjill March 2 2010, 16:42:22 UTC
Haha, aww, yay!

That's actually my bet and I's favorite part of the whole fic, so it makes me super happy that you like it =#.

Thank you so much, dear!

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phoenix_vixen March 2 2010, 03:17:17 UTC
Awww...that was so sweet! Sweetest fic I've read by far! :) I almost felt crushed when Ryan said no, but when he said "You've always had a Ryan." I was like, flailing and gasping and giddily happy. :)

Great fic! :)

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lumberxjill March 2 2010, 16:43:04 UTC
Hehe, thank you so much!

I'm really glad that you liked it.

<3

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