Comments | lumberxjill: how's it gonna be when you're not around?

lumberxjill

how's it gonna be when you're not around?

Mar 02, 2009 00:17

The TOUR!AU is finally done. And it has a name now, which is pretty sweet. It's not very long, but it doesn't need to be I guess. I hope you love it.

and it's like I can't feel a thing without you around.
ryan && brendon
2457 words

( and don't mind me if I get weak in the knees cause you have that effect on me. )

fic!. brendon/ryan

Comments 12

luvvera October 5 2009, 18:01:09 UTC

I know you like feedback and that's why I'm commenting on this even when I don't really know what to say. I hate always writing "I loved this" or "this was amazing" because it sounds too repetitive and blank, and I'm not imaginative enough to come up with flattering descriptive adjectives.
That said, I am embarrased to show you my stuff because you are too good for me, but I hope your beta abilities will make me better.
About the fic: just perfect.

lumberxjill October 7 2009, 03:54:21 UTC

I hate always writing the same thing too, but there are only so many ways of saying you love something. Thank you so much, dear, I'm really proud of this fic and I'm thrilled that you like it =]

Stop being down on yourself! You're fic is good, but there's always room for improvement. All my fic is beta'd by my friend Shan.