Fading Scars: Road to Recovery (3/?)

Jul 15, 2011 17:51

Title: Fading Scars

Rating: PG, some mature themes and mild language. Nothing too serious though. Subject to change.

Summary: Chloe keeps vigil at Oliver’s bedside, trying to deal with her emotions, after he is branded by Zod.

Warning: None at this point in time, but I only have a rough outline for the fic, so that may change. Also, because this fic ( Read more... )

verse: scars, fandom: smallville, mutlichapter, pairing: chlollie, fanfic: fading scars

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serafina19 July 16 2011, 00:35:52 UTC
I think reviews in general are down being summer time, but don't fret too much. I really like this story so far as well as your take on the emotions that revolve during this point in canon.

Oliver going to WT to get Chloe is very in-character and I loved how that entire scene played out. I'm also a big fan of Victor, so it was nice to see him around.

As a side note, nivieniv, if you see this, awesome banner!

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nivieniv July 16 2011, 02:24:20 UTC
*bows* thank you so much!

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luminare91 July 22 2011, 16:30:18 UTC
I've always wondered where the rest of the team was during everything at the end of that season. We get a brief glimpse of them, but I wanted to know what they were doing. So this is my solution.

I also figured that it would take an intervention of some kind to get Chloe out of Watchtower.

Thanks so much for the review!

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jesterlady July 16 2011, 01:51:48 UTC
I love Emil.

Thank goodness she got her head out of her ass.

Love the team helping whichever member is being an idiot at the moment.

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luminare91 July 22 2011, 16:30:47 UTC
Isn't that what a team's for, lol. Thanks for the review!

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nivieniv July 16 2011, 02:23:56 UTC
I'm sorry you didn't get many reviews on your previous update :/ But like Sera said, it's summer time, so there's bound to be a lack in reviews as well as fic updates around this time. Wouldn't worry too much about it, though I can understand how it doesn't exactly have a motivating effect on you.

Anyway, I just read through this fic and I really love the insight you've managed to provide into both Chloe and Oliver. Doesn't hurt that you're a talented writer and seem to have a firm grasp on the characterization of them both either ;)

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luminare91 July 28 2011, 19:03:47 UTC
I'm so glad that you like my characterizations. I'm always worried that I'm going too far into my own head. Your praise really makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, lol. It doesn't hurt that your banner was absolutely amazing and completely inspiring!

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luminare91 August 11 2011, 19:34:48 UTC
Thank you so much! It really means a lot to know that so many people are reading my fics. I've always been a bit insecure a bout my writing and it really helps to know how much people enjoy it. I'm definitely not giving up on this. I do have the next chapter semi-planned out it's just refusing to be written, lol.

And you're english was great. Thank you so much!

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mystic_ri96 July 16 2011, 18:48:57 UTC
aww i really liked the progress they made here
i also love the fact that the whole team agreed w/ Ollie and tht Ollie was able to get Chloe to c reason(:

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luminare91 August 11 2011, 19:35:11 UTC
Thank you! I've always thought that the league would look after each other

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