Wake - Chapter 6: I Don't Wanna Fall Asleep

Mar 09, 2010 18:03

Fandom: Alice Nine
Pairings: ToraxSaga
Genre: Angst, Crackish (at times), Drama, Romance, Suspense,
Rating: R
Warnings: Psychological Screwiness, a lot of it.
Summary: As the days fade, time marches onward. Or so it seems. Is this life real? Does it matter? Is anything real… or is it just a dream?

Disclaimer: I don’t claim to see the future, know ( Read more... )

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TT_TT maunetjeret March 10 2010, 03:25:39 UTC
This was a beautiful and emotional read.
He did as he was directed, turning back to see himself laying half entangled on the bed with his lover next to him. He ran a gentle hand down the curve of Saga’s back, watching the slight ripple of goosebumps make a trail where his fingers lead. The look in his eyes could only be described as one emotion.
It brought tears to my eyes. I'm a bit speechless and the ending of the chapter is like, whoa! I can't wait for you to update again.
Don't be so apologetic; it was so good your delay is easily forgivable.

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Re: TT_TT luminous_vibe March 13 2010, 07:42:36 UTC
That icon is so amazing. I've been staring at it for a good ten minutes or so before I remembered I came here to do something ^.^

That part was the one I was most nervous about when writing this. Not just the whole scene but that part in particular so I'm seriously overjoyed you liked it. I'm glad to see you're still coming back and still enjoying this so much. Thank you. :)

The next update won't take nearly so long. Thank you again for reading and everything ^.^

<3

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yumi_kazuko28 March 10 2010, 04:57:25 UTC
really beautiful... =)

I’m already awake. You’re the one who’s still sleeping
---->> it really made me curious... XDD

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luminous_vibe March 13 2010, 07:43:41 UTC
Thanks so much! ^.^

Curiosity is good, yes? ^.^ You'll see soon. I'm happy you enjoyed this, the rest is yet to come.

<3

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luminous_vibe March 13 2010, 07:47:40 UTC
Waaa! Everyday? Wow, I'm so excited you like this. I'm glad to see you come back and keep liking it ^.^ I'll try not to keep the next one too long. Thank you so much for reading.

<3

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bannnn March 10 2010, 06:50:48 UTC
i love this story
its so good !
i cant wait for the next chapter :)

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luminous_vibe March 13 2010, 07:48:48 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you like it ^.^ The rest is coming soon.

<3

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erikaoi March 10 2010, 07:39:09 UTC
Oh my.its twisted.tow u took so much time writting diz bt im glad.now the reality is that tora is the one that sleeping?update soon coz im dead curious

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luminous_vibe March 13 2010, 07:50:25 UTC
Yes, a twist! ^.^ Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm so happy you continue to like it. The next part is coming soon.

<3

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erikaoi March 16 2010, 06:08:06 UTC
yes!!! i'm looking forward to next chapt...

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