Wake - Chapter 8: I See You Now

Mar 25, 2010 02:41

Fandom: Alice Nine
Pairings: ToraxSaga
Genre: Angst, Crackish (at times), Drama, Romance, Suspense,
Rating: R
Warnings: Psychological Screwiness, a lot of it.
Summary: As the days fade, time marches onward. Or so it seems. Is this life real? Does it matter? Is anything real… or is it just a dream?

Disclaimer: I don’t claim to see the future, know ( Read more... )

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sumikatara March 25 2010, 12:17:26 UTC
Love it!

I'll post a real comment later...

<3

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sumikatara March 28 2010, 03:09:49 UTC
Finally I get to comment properly ( ... )

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luminous_vibe March 31 2010, 00:01:14 UTC
I must say first and foremost that your comments over the course of this story have been amazing for me to read. I’m so thrilled and excited with everything you’ve said, how you’ve read all the chapters and the amount of enjoyment you’ve gotten out of this and now you tell me you’re drawing part of it… you’ve truly blown me away. Thank you so much for reading and commenting and letting me know how I’m doing and everything ( ... )

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sumikatara March 31 2010, 13:16:24 UTC
I felt I should reply this time...

I'm glad you have been happy to read my comments as I sometimes feel that I might have posted comments that are too long and boring but I'm glad they weren't. It's nice to know that I can actually write something useful. It makes me happy to know that my comments are appreciated!

I'm drawing part of it. It may take forever with the rate I work at, especially with my lack of free time lately, but of course you can see it when it's complete ^_^ I just hope I don't ruin it!

Tora hearing Saga was a big clue, it's just that I had forgotten to mention it before so don't worry, you did make it clear!

I don't think there is anyone that wouldn't melt at Hiroto with sad eyes. That would be just...almost impossible?

I will definitely read what you write in the future, I have actually just started to read what you've written before so you might receive some more comments over the next few days if that's okay! I'll try not to write TOO much! I seem to have a habit of doing that.

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maunetjeret March 25 2010, 12:58:31 UTC
This was great. I loved Your description of Saga's face when Tora said he loved him. *Sigh* And that ride home... Shou was amusing and Saga was naughty and I'm dying to know what Saga has in store for the evening, just like Tora. So I'm gonna go dream up some steamy scenes, but before I do I just want to say thanks for sharing this. It was really a great read. <33

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luminous_vibe March 31 2010, 00:07:09 UTC
^.^ Thanks for reading all the way through! This was partially for all the people I know who are Tora/Saga fans so I'm glad you enjoyed it all the way through. Naughty naughty Saga is fun ^.^ I hope you had some good dreams about that part.

<3

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erikaoi March 25 2010, 14:59:27 UTC
The end?gosh.thats really not@what I have expected but its wonderfull.Now I know the truth.the battle comes to the end.yay.yes go with one shot but hope lots toraxsaga,sagaxtora.hehe.

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luminous_vibe March 31 2010, 00:08:55 UTC
The end! ^.^ It feels god to type it. I hope everything you were confused about makes sense now. Thanks so much for reading. I'm really excited you enjoyed it to the end. There are definatly some Tora/Saga one-shots in me so we'll see where I end up going next.

Once again, thanks so much for reading. :)

<3

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erikaoi April 1 2010, 04:06:43 UTC
heheh...will wait then unpatiently..hehehe

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silveryxdark March 25 2010, 15:00:41 UTC
Thank you so, so much for sharing this beautifully written story. I really loved the entire story - how Tora was really dreaming about everything, and yet it was real - because he was struggling to realise the truth that he loved Saga... The entire story was very intriguing, and we see how their relationship developed, and what really happened in the end. Yes, this was an amazing read ♥ Definitely one of the best fics I have read.

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luminous_vibe March 31 2010, 00:11:53 UTC
Awww you made me blush! Again! ^.^ Thanks so much for reading and commenting on this. It was quite a story for me to write, a step out of my little comfort box if you will, so I'm excited you not only enjoyed the whole thing but that you thought it's one of the best you've seen. You made me happy ^.^

Thank you again, so much for reading. :)

<3

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blindcottonlove March 25 2010, 15:24:53 UTC
No, thank you for sharing the story and making the fandom a whole lot better! The ending wasn't quite what I had been expecting but somehow I really enjoyed the serene, caring and warm atmosphere here -they deserve bit of that, Tora and Saga, after all the crap they fought through :)

♥ Good luck with the upcoming projects! It's always refreshing to start from a clean table :D

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luminous_vibe March 31 2010, 00:17:54 UTC
*flail* ^.^ You're awesome with the commenting and making me smile and such. Gah. I hope we don't sit here all day and thank each other. Becuase I must thank you again for reading and commenting and making me smile and just generally being awesome ^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Thanks. I think I might need luck :) Your icon made me laugh btw, when I read this comment.

<3

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blindcottonlove April 4 2010, 13:12:56 UTC
Haha, I love that icon♥

Thanking is a fun and cheap hobby 8D Suits my student budget just fine<3

And awesome writers like you deserve all the awesomeness they can get! :D Happy Easter~

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