Comments | luminouspetals: [fic: one-shot] Begin at the Beginning

carmine_pink in luminouspetals

[fic: one-shot] Begin at the Beginning

Jun 11, 2012 17:37

Title: Begin at the Beginning
Type: One-shot
Word count: 2,978
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Yesung/Kyuhyun (Super Junior)
Summary: A series of firsts in Yesung and Kyuhyun’s relationship.
Note: The lines separating the sections are taken from English lyrics to SJ songs.

( The first time Yesung realized how much influence Kyuhyun had on him, he was lying with his back on the carpet, Kyuhyun’s weight on top of him preventing him from getting up. )

#one-shot, r: pg-13, fanfic, c: kyuhyun, t: slash, c: yesung, p: yesung/kyuhyun, g: super junior

Comments 12

junnosukex3 June 11 2012, 21:19:13 UTC

That was perfect ^^
Absolutely cute and romantic ! Thank you !

carmine_pink June 13 2012, 09:39:45 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it . :)

cemm20 June 12 2012, 05:24:17 UTC

really sweet and cute

carmine_pink June 13 2012, 09:42:10 UTC

Thank you! :D

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carmine_pink June 13 2012, 09:45:43 UTC

I'm so happy this could make you smile. :) Thanks for reading and commenting!

darkshoumy June 13 2012, 13:00:50 UTC

hi there! i really like your fic! Yesung and Kyuhyun are so cute and sweet! just love the interaction between the 2 of them ^^

carmine_pink June 15 2012, 07:43:08 UTC

Those two are adorable, aren't they? :D Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked this!

darkshoumy June 15 2012, 08:08:44 UTC

yeah too much adorable and cute! lol you're welcome thank you to you for the fic! ^^

echowillow June 14 2012, 12:58:43 UTC

This was really well written! I like how you started each part with 'the first time...', it was very ingenious of you. And how you ended with that line. Wonderful end to a beautiful beginning ♥

Every moment was a first, and all they needed to do was begin.

carmine_pink June 15 2012, 10:15:04 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad you think so! I thought this was a rather simple idea, compiling their first moments like a standard "Five times so-and-so couple did this..." type of fic (which I've never written, now that I think about it). But I'm really happy you liked the way it turned out. And can I just say I'm happy to see you continuing to read my fics. :) Thank you!