Comments | luminouspetals: [fic: one-shot] One More Try

carmine_pink in luminouspetals

[fic: one-shot] One More Try

Dec 31, 2015 12:53

Title: One More Try
Type: One-shot
Word count: 2,590
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Onew/Taemin (SHINee)
Summary: Is the past something you can simply erase and rewind? AU.

( Jinki caught Taemin at an opportune moment. )

#one-shot, r: pg-13, p: onew/taemin, fanfic, t: slash, c: taemin, c: onew, g: shinee, *au

Comments 5

oconje January 7 2016, 05:53:03 UTC

Not a big ontae shipper but your writing is so good! Wonderful!

carmine_pink January 7 2016, 14:14:20 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you could still enjoy the fic. :)

h3rokjj January 7 2016, 19:18:12 UTC

Really heart-felt and nicely done... more? XD

carmine_pink January 11 2016, 08:47:25 UTC

Heartfelt was what I was aiming for so I'm delighted to hear that. Thanks for reading and commenting!

sabrina165 November 9 2016, 08:08:50 UTC

Hi! I loved this. You better not fuck this up Jinki! Make him work for it, Taem! Lol.
"The smile never left Jinki’s face the whole time he was speaking. That unassumingly brilliant smile which made you believe you were unbelievably lucky to be the reason behind it." Urgh so true . .. Good job!
Jinkirella~