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luna481516

Lost Luau: For Queen gottalovev - The First Time Sawyer Met Richard

Jul 07, 2009 23:11

Queen gottalovev at the lostsquee Luau has requested Firsts. After narrowly missing each other for two seasons, I am pretty sure the first time Sawyer and Richard actually met was in LaFleur.
Title: On a Park Bench
Characters: Sawyer, Richard
Rating: PG
Word Count: 580
Spoilers: Through LaFleur, S5-08
Disclaimer: Lost nor its characters are not mine.

( The man who never got old posed that question to the man who had re-invented himself just hours earlier. )

luau 2009: fic

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luna481516 July 8 2009, 11:52:19 UTC

Indeed - I think there are some gaps to be filled in with these two in the interim!
Since Jack refuses to grow back his chest hair, someone's got to take up the slack.
Thanks for reading and glad you liked it.

eponine119 July 8 2009, 04:10:01 UTC

I like the mood and feel of this piece. And I love the cologne bit there towards the end!

luna481516 July 8 2009, 11:56:30 UTC

Thanks! I can totally see Richard making cologne part of his extensive grooming routine - in his tent.

haldoor July 8 2009, 09:59:50 UTC

Oh, the suggestion... wonderful.

luna481516 July 8 2009, 12:00:44 UTC

Thanks! With Sawyer there's almost always a suggestion...and I'd love to see it happen with these two.

gottalovev July 8 2009, 16:36:45 UTC

it's true, pretty sure that was their first meeting! and I love how you re-tell it, giving it this awesome little twist at the end! ohhh, that paring would be FABULOUS :)

this was excellent, a great Sawyer voice! thank you so much :)

luna481516 July 9 2009, 12:01:29 UTC

Thank you for your kind words! After that scene, it was clear that these two need to be slashed, and I'm itching for more of this pairing.

mrspiccoloswife July 8 2009, 17:01:32 UTC

Oh, I like this. The cologne bit was perfect! Richard so would. This kind of makes me want to ship them a little. Damn, like I need more rare ships! Anyway, great fic!

luna481516 July 9 2009, 12:07:26 UTC

Thanks so much! Richard intrigues me as a character who seems so out of place on the island, yet he's been there longer than everyone except Jacob, I guess!