Comments | luna481516: Fic: Cool Night (Sawyer/Julet)

luna481516

Fic: Cool Night (Sawyer/Julet)

Aug 22, 2009 21:43

( It was an unusually cool night, and she snuggled a little closer to the form already deep in sleep. )

Comments 24

tellshannon815 August 23 2009, 17:57:08 UTC

Loved this - these two being together are about the only thing I could stand of Life on DHARMA, so this was good to see!

luna481516 August 23 2009, 18:49:41 UTC

I only wished we could have seen more of them! Thanks for reading!

roseys_fics August 23 2009, 19:47:53 UTC

Wow ,this was so sweet and lovely and just... awww. :) This pairing was definitely the best part of the dharma era, so thank you so much for this!

luna481516 August 24 2009, 01:52:42 UTC

Aw, glad you liked it!

ozmissage August 23 2009, 22:44:11 UTC

This is so lovely. The part where she reassures him that she doesn't want to leave---that right there is why I love them so much. Wonderful work!

luna481516 August 24 2009, 01:53:50 UTC

Thanks! Giving reassurance is so different from the *cough* other chick. Thanks for commenting!

icequeen3101 August 24 2009, 00:27:02 UTC

very sweet fic :]

luna481516 August 24 2009, 01:54:12 UTC

Thanks for reading!

sadie_carter August 24 2009, 10:18:52 UTC

Sweet little piece of their intimacy - just lovely :) What I also like in here is the fact that you let us to see Sawyer's uncertainty. He was so hurt by Kate, by the fact that she used him and then run away from him that he found strange and unbelievable that Juliet let him stay, didn't want to retire from him. It's very touching and, IMO, very real for their relationship :)

luna481516 August 25 2009, 00:59:42 UTC

Thank you! I do think he was wary since no one had ever stayed for him - his whole life - in a real relationship.