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luna_dove

Guardian: Chapter 4

Nov 20, 2010 22:05

Summery: When a threat on her life appears, Claudia is forced to leave the Warehouse and go the small town of Haven, where she will be safe - if the isn’t killed by the odd, supernatural occurrences around the town, of course. However, once at Haven she realizes that the town and its inhabitants - especially Audrey Parker - might have more of a ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

miss_bittens November 21 2010, 09:39:38 UTC

The mirror seems like a good idea and a terrible one, for basically the same reason - the Warehouse team find themselves in danger quite a lot. Whenever that happens, Claudia can go help (possibly unnecessarily) and get herself found by the Regents, or sit there torturing herself by watching and not being able to do anything. Actually, usually she wouldn't be able to run off to the rescue anyway, she wouldn't have time ( ... )

luna_dove November 28 2010, 00:01:09 UTC

Wow. Look at the icon. That is what you have done to my brain, in a good way. You totally put a lot of thought in the mirror plot device. And I will say that one of the comments you made in here is correct in the plot ahead. ;)

I'm glad you like Haven - I didn't originally watch it at first, but I really got into it once they started talking more about the mythology of Haven. My favorite episodes are the shapeshifter episode (mainly because it was choc full of Nathan/Audrey) and the final episode of the season, which just gave me so much to work with in this fic.

miss_bittens November 28 2010, 05:55:20 UTC

Hee. I'm pleased you like my icon - it's the only one I've ever done. "Her hair has NINJA POWERS," was pretty much what was popping into my head every time I saw a picspamed or screencapped fight with epic Kahlan hair swooshery, so I had to express that thought ( ... )

miss_bittens November 28 2010, 05:58:33 UTC

You meant look at your own icon, didn't you? ...Shit.

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luna_dove November 28 2010, 00:03:18 UTC

I'm glad you liked Claudia's home. It was so odd how I could see it so clearly in my mind's eye.

Things in town will be way more interesting now that Claudia's arrived. :)

Claudia will look for Artie eventually, but she might not like what she finds...

dandiandi22 November 25 2010, 18:56:20 UTC

Yay haha I finally got around to reading this after it got lost in my flist.

I like how you're setting up the Audrey/Claudia friendship I can see that as they're both outsiders of sorts to Haven they might form some kind of bond :D

Also all the Beauty and the Beast stuff was awesome with the library and the mirror both things that I would like to have.

*sigh* poor Claudia. She needs a cheering up.

luna_dove November 28 2010, 00:06:42 UTC

I love your icon. Aw. Okay, to be fair, I love anything that has to do with the Claudia and Artie, father/daughter relationship, but it's still adorable.

Audrey and Claudia have a LOT in common, so they'll use that to bond.

I honestly didn't even think of the library being a Beauty and the Beast thing, but it does make sense that it would be (although the Beast's library is 10 times larger. I want to live in that fairytale, or it's library at least).

Claudia does need cheering up. This is a very depressing story for her. And I'm not helping her much as the writer... ;)