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luna_dove

Deception: Chapter 2

Nov 24, 2010 18:14

Summery: A week ago, Jeff honestly wouldn’t have thought that hanging out with Abed would have led to him sitting in a warehouse, tied and gagged and listening to some crazy woman call Annie “Anya”.
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to and including “Conspiracy Theories”
Disclaimer: I don’t own “Community” or “NCIS” (reference made it in this chapter).
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jeff/annie, fanfic, community

Comments 9

ayleecambell November 25 2010, 02:10:46 UTC

Awesome! I'm so glad you wrote this! I'm really loving it and I can't wait to read more!

luna_dove November 27 2010, 23:52:00 UTC

Thanks! I hope to get another chapter up soon!

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luna_dove November 27 2010, 23:52:58 UTC

Ziva is awesome. ;)

I'm almost finished with the next chapter, so I hope to have it up soon!

lapacifidora November 26 2010, 05:00:27 UTC

He was there early because his math class “Math in Modern Day Television” (which mainly consisted of watching taped NCIS and trying to follow whatever that goth scientist character did).

First, I seriously want to take that class. Mostly because Pauley Perrette actually has the smarts to back all that stuff up, and she tries to make the show accurate.

Second, not to be Britta/cancer, but is there supposed to be a second part of this sentence? Like, 'He was only there (...) because...'? Or am I reading it incorrectly?

luna_dove November 27 2010, 23:55:02 UTC

Oh, you're right on that grammar error. Thank you for telling me about that, I fixed it! If you happen to see any others, let me know. I try to catch all the errors, but sometimes a few make it out in the final draft anyways.

And yes, I too want to take the "Math in Modern Day Television" class because it's the only math class I'd probably pay attention to 100 percent of the time.

lapacifidora November 30 2010, 02:11:07 UTC

You're welcome. The same thing happens to me, and I'm an editor by trade.:)

it's the only math class I'd probably pay attention to 100 percent of the time.

Hear hear. :D

webeh November 26 2010, 06:02:41 UTC

Seriously, I was just thinking the other day that someone should write a "Annie is a Mossad agent" fic. Awesome...

I'm just assuming she's Mossad, because of the whole Jewish thing.

luna_dove November 27 2010, 23:57:37 UTC

Mossad is a good idea, but I'm writing her working for the American government. But now I really want her to be in Mossad so she could hang out with Ziva. Damn. Now someone has to write a fic with those characters in it! (Well, that might be what I ask for in the next Ficcy Friday!)

louis vuitton purse anonymous February 11 2011, 17:22:09 UTC

I can ask you?