Original Fic: Outcast (TTM, #shortstorysaturday)

[luna_moonsilver]

Title: Outcast
Fandom: Original
Prompt(s): tamingthemuse #212, Your prison is to walk through this world all alone
Rating: G
Word count: 1,650
Summary: Savannah walked into this town, a new town, with all her worldly belongings packed in a bag, slung over her shoulder. Her shoes were sturdy and kicked up small clouds of vivid red dust as she walked; she swallowed,

Comments

[radioactivekate]

Oh I like the finished product even more :)

And, as I said on the first read, I particularly like the punishment (especially now that I completely understand it lol XD)

[luna_moonsilver]

Lol I was going to send it to you for a read-through but I needed to make sure I posted it before midnight and I figured you'd already read the beginning :P

But thank you :D haha I'm not sure if I want to re-write it, because I like it, but I think I could get more from it if I had more time... May just let it sit though :)