And the writing goes on

[lunablue_girl]

This has been a good writing week thus far, and we're hoping to have a nicely polished 50 pages to send in by Monday. The big revision is that it was decided the story needed to be told from 2 different pov. That's a big change! It adds a lot and I think it works, and it is keeping Collin from jumping pov all over the place or, even worse, using

Comments

[dreamwell_ali]

be very cautious with books told in different povs - if they're not done well, they can be really hard to follow. Personally, I prefer the obvious ones where each chapter is a different pov and it lists the character's name at the top of the chapter. but avoid having one character speak in 1st person and all the others speak in 3rd. that's really annoying too.

[jadesr]

You sound SO much happier when you are writing.