Those Were The Years (1/?)

[lunarebina]

Title: Those Were The Years
Author: lunarebina
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Junseung, mentioned of Dooseob and Kiwoon
Summary: The typical high school heartache...
A/N:This is supposed to be a oneshot, but I tend to be very greedy with details so it becomes longer than expected. Probably will be divided into 2 or 3 parts. It's a song fic based on a Taiwan

Comments

[pieceofsaddy]

oh gosh oh gosh
I'm dying over here jsidhjsifhiuhsfujnjknsdkjfnkj

“Junhyung-ah, what’s wrong?” Hyunseung’s voice was a little soft, a little hoarse, a little… cute. And Junhyung realized that it didn’t really matter whether Hyunseung was a boy or a girl anymore.

;_____________; I wanna hug this paragraph.

“Seung -ah, I think I’m hopelessly in love... what should I do?”

NOW KISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS lol

The last sentences were great.
Omg, I can't wait for the next chapter ;-;

[lunarebina]

i was wondering if anyone would quote some lines to comment, cos i'd be really happy, AND U DID!! xD wahahaha! kudos to you!!
thanks for commenting! I feel shameless to even say this but i love those lines that you've quoted too. AHAHA!
please live to read part 2 yah, dont die yet. I mean, dont die at all! LOL!

[zeko21]

Ugh.... So good. Words can't possibly describe my feelings now.
The whole setup of the story to their cute bickerings is just perfect. Haven't come across anything like it.
I shall patiently wait for the next parts. <--- not really a 100% sure about the patient part though... ^_^
<33 n_____n

Oh and I RARELY comment, if ever. So you'v done a pretty damn good job to get me commenting lol. Okay I'll leave now ~_~

[lunarebina]

now i do feel like a proud author LOL! Thanks for commenting, and for being patient xD cos part 2 was only up 2 days ago xD LOL!