You and I Make Three - Final Chapter!

Nov 01, 2010 16:12

CH 13

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“Wait. You guys haven’t done it yet?” Ueda asked incredulously.

He sat back in his chair.

“I thought you guys would be at it like every hour or something.”

Jin blushed a little and laughed.

“That’s kind of hard if you have a little kid hanging around.”

Ueda smiled as he made a decision.

“I’ll…baby-sit her tonight, while you guys ( Read more... )

you and i make three

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mae0513 November 1 2010, 08:44:31 UTC
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~~\(^o^)/

love it!!!!

thanks for sharing~~~~

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lunarimis November 1 2010, 08:52:38 UTC
Thanks! I'm really sorry for the delay.I hope you like it!

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snow_meow November 1 2010, 08:51:13 UTC
Ueda... I really don't want you to be with Yumi.
That girl is just thinking of herself and no one else.
I don't want you to be the current play thing then toss aside.

Why do I feel like this chapter ended the way it did because you had no idea how to end it? ^^

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lunarimis November 1 2010, 08:58:27 UTC
*Sweat Drop* This chapter was actually very,very long! I ' cut' it alot.

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snow_meow November 1 2010, 14:56:51 UTC
I guess that is why it feels like it is a rushed ending.
But I am glad that it ended and ended well.

If you wrote anymore you might lose inspiration to finish it.

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lunarimis November 1 2010, 15:21:50 UTC
That is exactly what happened! *Sighs*

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imangelofmusic November 1 2010, 09:31:27 UTC
waa!!! Ö:Ö!!!! ..WAA!! Ö:Ö *super shock* *trying to spit out words* YAY! Loved it!

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lunarimis November 1 2010, 14:07:06 UTC
Thank you!

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kurakura_chan November 1 2010, 09:32:29 UTC
sooooooo happy to see this update :D
will comment properly later ^^

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lunarimis November 1 2010, 14:07:19 UTC
lol! Thanks!

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kurakura_chan November 2 2010, 05:59:09 UTC
i'm not satisfied with the ending.
it's too short.
i want more akame family love.
sorry for complining :/

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dorayaki_chan November 1 2010, 09:34:17 UTC
My my my look who,s back from outer space \(^u^)/ eergh I hope that tat chan is really really not in to that evil diva he deserve better :) so udding turns in to mommy now yaaaay

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lunarimis November 1 2010, 14:08:04 UTC
Gomen for making you wait! Thank you for your support!

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