lost + unlock + summer day

[lunayeppeo]

title: lost
type: oneshot (246 words)
fandom: shinee
pairing: onkey
rating/warnings: g
author's notes: quick piece from a 15-minute challenge that i edited a little and reposted here just in case it is lost forever. beta'd by naegative ♥

Comments

[sm16]

Awww.

I liked the first one! It's like an extension of some pick-up line X3

The second one was cute too. If only Onew knew X3

[lunayeppeo]

Darliiiiiiing ♥!!!

Hurr hurr that was so cheesy, it practically wrote itself. I hope someone uses it someday. 8D

Hee, yes~ Thank you so much, darling! (/^3^)/

[pinkweather]

what i wouldn't give to be able to write something as cute and coherent as this in just 15 minutes 8D

the first one still makes me lol no matter how many times i read it. oh jinki, you lame, lame thing, you ♥

asdfajlgkla variety shows ;_;

[lunayeppeo]

You can! I believe in yoooooou! \o/

So cheesy I think I would be torn between punching and laughing at whoever tries to pull this on me. XD

VARIETY SHOWS ;____________; *mourns forever*

[pinkweather]

;_;

this reminds me of all the lame pick-up lines my friend used to share in high school. stuff like "did it hurt?" "what?" "falling out of heaven :)" really makes you want to smack a person omg.

/hugs you tight D: there will be plenty of others in the future! hopefully soon

[lunayeppeo]

IKR! They're a hit-and-miss with me, I think. Sometimes they make me laugh, and sometimes they make me hit the person. ._.

*clings tightly* But there will never be another Hello Babyyyyyyyy. Unless, idk, they follow Yoogeun to preschool or something. :|

[meltrules]

you dk how awesome your writing is ♥
love it.

[lunayeppeo]

Aaaaww, thank you so much! ;_;