Comments | lupa_libri: This Garden Once Was Perfect (Spencer/Jon, NC-17)

frk_werewolf in lupa_libri

This Garden Once Was Perfect (Spencer/Jon, NC-17)

Jul 23, 2008 09:58

Title: This Garden Once Was Perfect
Author: frk_werewolf
Fandom: Bandom (Panic at the Disco)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Spencer/Jon
Warnings: mpreg, see notes, and omg the angst
Word Count: 5,424
Summary: "I'm..." Spencer can't finish. He can't even fucking blink.
"You're pregnant, Spencer," she says, patiently.Notes: This isn't your happy mpreg. This deals with ( Read more... )

bandslash, spencer/jon

Comments 40

i_heart_cliches July 23 2008, 18:03:50 UTC

awww this was so sad. I love how you explored the emotional side of an abortion. I'm pro-life, but this really made me think. I loved it. Fantastic job! :D

frk_werewolf July 23 2008, 18:21:43 UTC

Thank you. This was a hard topic to write about, it's so touchy ya know? So I'm glad I managed to bring it across in a way that both sides, pro-life and pro-choice, could appreciate. ^_^

inpurity July 23 2008, 18:06:53 UTC

That was really well written and touching. Regardless of anyone's idea about abortion you wrote a story about love and life and the harsh reality of choices.

I truly enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.

frk_werewolf July 23 2008, 18:22:31 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

rainparade_xo July 23 2008, 18:07:11 UTC

That was beautiful.
The part after the abortion made me cry.
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Poor Spence breaking down.
It was heartbreaking, but still beautiful.
And it did end amazing, even if I'm still crying.
kudos to you.

frk_werewolf July 23 2008, 18:25:11 UTC

Thank you so much. Sorry you're still crying, even though secretly it kind of pleases me that this fic is powerful enough to drive so many people to tears (I cried writing it, so people should suffer with me, right?).

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frk_werewolf July 24 2008, 02:29:27 UTC

Thank you so much.

lol, don't you just love how our brains supply stuff like that?

parasupernormal July 23 2008, 19:50:35 UTC

Omg.
Here's me stupidly not reading the warnings at the top, so I thought it was gonna be your average mpreg where they keep it and manage to juggle the band and the baby and everythings okay...
D:

But it was still awesome! Memed.

frk_werewolf July 24 2008, 02:31:03 UTC

Yeah. I almost did write an mpreg like that, but then I was thinking about how there are so few fics out there about mpreg that are really realistic...err...well as realistic as you can get with men becoming pregnant. :P

parasupernormal July 24 2008, 06:15:48 UTC

True. All there seems to be right now are the same fics being recycled... way to go against the flow ^^ *big thumbs up, just like on DVD reviews*