Everybody needs a little sum'in sum'in.

[lupercali]

So I'm having trouble writing -- and well, with being a human being these last few weeks, but that's not the point

Comments

[thawrecka]

What you've written of this so far is wonderful. The characterisation is believable and it's all nicely grounded in sensual details. I can't wait to see the finished product.

[swtalmnd]

i really love the feralness of it, the way he's got to tame himself like a wild animal and remus does, as well, twelve years of forgiveness in a hundred small things he does, like washing him, putting him to bed human, reading a book out of a memory they'd shared only recently.. i'd love to see what grows out of the fits and starts of their new relationship, neither of them the boys they once were, who once were friends, but still using that friendship as a basis between them anyway.

the lush descriptions are lovely, as well, it really brings home sirius' renewed sense of wonder at simply being allowed to feel joy, as well as the debilitating despair that still dogs at his heels (er, so to speak. heh.). good luck with it!

[thrihyrne]

He'd seen all of it as he'd remembered what he'd looked like once: beautiful and strong, olive and golden and blue-eyed, laughing.

And then it was hard to breathe, terrible and wonderful, to feel all that concentrated joy and realize how much of it was already gone.

Ooooh. Wonderful phrases and images you have going on. Very much looking forward to more! And good things shouldn't be rushed; don't feel pressured to "hurry up and finish". I don't think anyone expects you to be mass-producing your stories!!

[canicula12]

That was absolutely astounding and beautiful and I'm incapable of speech because it was exactly what I have been wanting to read for a very long time. VERY, very beautiful, and I love it.