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remeciel November 29 2008, 19:05:48 UTC
Oh my. You almost made me cry. This is so intense, so beautiful.

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lupinlicious November 29 2008, 19:15:14 UTC
Oh, thank you! I seem to have a thing for sad stories, as many people have told me.

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remeciel November 29 2008, 19:16:03 UTC
I do agree with them. :D

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lettersjumbled November 29 2008, 19:45:06 UTC
That was beautiful

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lupinlicious November 29 2008, 20:57:24 UTC
Thanks. :)

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brighty18 December 1 2008, 22:43:08 UTC
Oh, so beautiful and poetic and powerful. It literally makes me teary!

I love the parenthetical asides and Sirius' POV!

Gorgeous!

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lupinlicious December 2 2008, 00:44:17 UTC
Ooh, yay! My purpose in life is to make people cry.

...In a good way, of course.

Thank you! I usually have trouble writing Sirius' POV, because we're so different from each other, so I'm this turned out okay.

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lupinlicious December 2 2008, 00:44:56 UTC
*so I'm glad this turned out okay.

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remuslives23 April 6 2009, 11:35:27 UTC
Lovely!

We whisper sweet words in each other’s ears; mine of apologies and yours of forgiveness, both screaming of love.

This was so beautiful! Wonderful!

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lupinlicious April 6 2009, 13:35:59 UTC
...I wrote that?! 0.o (*checks*) Oh wow I did.

Well, thank you very much Ms. Reviewer.

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