Poems!

Apr 04, 2009 14:20

Kind of like haikus, but not really.
X's are links to their inspirations

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child says "hi" to bear,
   bear eats child
bear isn't sorry.

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vines intertwine with branches
   i try to climb and fall
sun sets overhead.

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flower unfolds its petals
  invites the bees inside
can't wait for next spring.

holding hands in silence
   perfect companionship
snow melting ( Read more... )

poetry: original, poetry: haiku

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lupinlicious April 4 2009, 20:53:05 UTC
Well, thank you. That's one of my favourites.

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remeciel April 4 2009, 18:58:04 UTC
The first one is incredibly funny. And witty. :)

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lupinlicious April 4 2009, 20:53:42 UTC
Thanks!

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caitface April 4 2009, 23:14:23 UTC
i liked that first one.
bear isn't sorry.

and i found this through your dA. :D

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lupinlicious April 5 2009, 20:49:43 UTC
Thanks. :)

Oh yeah! I forgot I put a link up there.

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remuslives23 April 4 2009, 23:42:11 UTC
I love the first one (giggled out loud) and the last two, particularly the pictures in the sand. Beautiful imagery in so few words.

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lupinlicious April 5 2009, 20:51:01 UTC
Thanks! I'm not sure why everyone seems to like the first one, though. It's not one of my favourites.

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