Anonymous: In the autumn fields

[lupinn]

In the autumn fields
mingled with the pampas grass
flowers are blooming
should my love too, spring forth
or shall we never meet?

A nice Tanka, yes yes?

Comments

[faireegirl182]

Oui! That was so lovely, it even made me go all breathless and girly for a minute :p You've got skills and I like it. Mmmm hmm =)

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[lupinn]

Oh, you make me happy for thinking I could write that, but when it all comes down to it, that tanka is about a thousand and some years older then us :(
I came across that wile doing some investigation on Japanese literature, and I must say I went all girly as well :D

[faireegirl182]

I know it's practically ancient. Still, you can use even un-original stuff quite effectively, if you just know how to :D *wink*

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P.S. I'm a whore for not replying to this till now :( Sorryyyyyyy